Posted by giveawayboy on January 06, 2006 at 16:10:27:
In Reply to: Re: word construction: 01/05/06 posted by PS on January 06, 2006 at 12:52:02:
: : It was a dark day. The world was closing.
: : There stood the exploding musical grandmaster.
: : Everything was bending in on itself.
: : Start up the band.
: : Hidden like a mummy in forgetfulness
: : Hidden like the afikomen.
: : Uncreated Light.
: : Awaits to break forth.
: : Entrancements of owls kindly beckoned
: : To provide a hidden channel
: : Over the luminous ripples
: : Down in phosphorus caverns.
: : Nothing is starkly written
: : In powder under fingernails
: : And screechings of bone on steel
: : The words are like oil on my head.
: : Guardians with lanterns
: : Turning to whisper
: : Stood witness to the entrance
: : Of fools into wisdom.
: : Bill Rogers 01/05/06
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: Oh, that fourth paragraph. Those are pretty much the things that make me crazy--chalky dust and screechings. (The worst are fingernails on slate.) Please don't starkly write anything that way. Please.
: But the screechings of owls kindly beckoning are good.
: Luminous ripples in phosphorous caverns -- can I live there?
: Uncreated Light waiting to break forth -- can I see that?
: The entrance of fools into wisdom -- can I be that?
Yes, you can, can, can. Thanks for reading. It's a sort of a dreamscape of recent months.